Hi, I'm Susan
the editor behind Fine Line Proofs.
I work with fiction writers—mostly indie authors, some just beginning, others well on their way.
If I asked you if your story’s done, would you say, “Yes ... but it’s not really ready.”? That sounds to me like you’re not stuck in plot holes or big-picture structure—you’re tangled in the sentence-level weeds. And that’s exactly what I’m here for.
Before you know it, we could be smoothing awkward phrasing, catching consistency issues, or fixing grammar that’s slipped through the cracks. Oftentimes you simply need a final proofread so everything is clean and correct before publishing. Wherever you are on that final stretch, I’ll meet you there—with care, attention, and a sharp eye.
I used to work the kind of job that checked all the practical boxes—but left me feeling boxed in. Over time, I realized I wasn’t just looking for a career change. I was looking for something that inspired my creativity and what I found allowed me to use my gift for language and details. Discovering editing and returning to writing gave me that spark—and starting my own business gave me the freedom to do work that feels like home.
Don’t avoid those next steps for your draft, staring at it, wondering if it’s clear enough, clean enough, or done enough. I can help you get it there—without the overwhelm. You won’t lose control of your work. You won’t lose your voice. What you’ll gain is confidence that the story you want to tell is exactly what readers will read.
If this appeals to you, then I believe that what we both have in common is a love for storytelling and a deep desire to share it with the world.
Regardless of where you stand on this path, having a sharp, fresh perspective for spotting inconsistencies or awkward phrasing will make your story stand out to readers. The key is to approach editing with a growth mindset, viewing each correction not as a flaw but as an opportunity to enhance your craft. Whether you're an experienced author or a newcomer, embracing the editing process can lead to breakthroughs that transform your writing into an engaging and powerful narrative.
The best editing is the kind you don’t see.
Choose your editor like you would a good friend—someone who has your back, tells you the straight truth, but understands the best way to hand it to you.